on saturday I had a zoom with my friends caleb and darcy we played our minecraft world it was a survival world and we found DIAMONDS we were so happy we played in the world longer then we decided we would make a world where all our friends could play on a smp so we made the base of the spawn and made it look like we have played in the world already then caleb left so it was just me and darcy then we played on a new world and almost bet the game!
Cool Lachlan, it sounds like you had so much fun. Unfortunatly it was a little hard to read as there was no punctuation. Remember every time you need to take a breathe put in a full stop. Also start your sentences and names with a capital letter. Other than that I think you gave us DIAMONDS.
ReplyDeleteHey Lachlan
ReplyDeleteMust be nice to spend time with your friends on zoom! And even better doing something that you love. I did a video call with my friends and we just played kahoot.
In your writing you talked about an smp. Is that a minecraft thing? Remember to be aware that you might have a reader that knows very little about your topic. So you need to add a little more details! Happy blogging!
Kia ora Lachlan,
ReplyDeleteI'm a gamer and I haven't really tried Minecraft. I agree with Marleen, it. might be great to explain what it is and even try to convince me why it's so great.
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa